Goal: Re Read My Writing
Title: Family Hangout
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I was sitting in my room playing Apex Legends and Fortnite with Rj and we got a dub. Then all of a sudden I heard a car pull up next to the house, I looked out the window and saw my cousin. I was so excited because I haven’t seen for a while.
He knocked on the door and I went to open it. He said that I was going to hangout with him for the day. I was so excited and I went and got my stuff. My mum was talking with him inside while I was getting ready.
When I got ready then I got in the car and said goodbye to mum. He said that we were going to Wellington to hangout. When we got to Porirua we had a feed. We went to burger king because it was in the gas station and my cousin needed something for the car.
After we ate we went to the pools and we went for a dive on the diving boards. I went on the 50 m and he went on the 70 m. The highest one was 130 m and we saw some people jump off. Then they put up a giant slide in the big pool that connected to the 130 m diving board. I went down and I went so fast down that I couldn't see. After that we went into the hot tub for an hour or two.
Later that evening we went for a snack and went to Pack And Save. I got both of us a drink and a feed. He had a V and I had a Monster. Later that evening he dropped me back home and he said hopefully you can come and watch me play the drums.
2 weeks later….
I was playing my game with Rj again and we got dubs all day then all of a sudden I saw another car pull up. I didn’t look this time because I thought that it was one of my mum's work mates helping her or something. I was killing Rj more than he did to me so I was winning.
The score was 81 to 69 to me. Then I hear my mum call me down. I was confused, maybe my mum’s friend was going to give me money that he said he would give me.
I saw my brother and I was so excited. Because he lived in Auckland and I haven’t seen him for a while. I was also confused because I didn’t know why he was here. He said we will be hanging out for 5 days. I was so excited to be there.
We went to Wellington and went through town. It was 9:00am so I was hungry for breakfast. We got one sushi bowl for breakfast with noodles. After we ate we went to the the movies to see King Kong Vs Godzilla.
It was funny and awesome to watch. We got a drink, lollies and snacks. Luckily my friend was working because we were allowed to bring snacks in and free food from the bar. We also got some free tickets so we could watch the movie. It had a lot of gore in it and it had a lot of action.
We also were able to watch Mortal Kombat. I wasn’t really allowed to watch it but since my friend was working I got the hook ups. It was sad at first but when everyone started fighting it was so cool. It was long and had a LOT of gore.
After that we went to our cousin's house. I have been there before so I already knew who the people in the house was but my brother didn’t know.
(To be continued)
Hi Neeko, can we have a go at reposting this so it is easier to read?
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