World Eaters I was walking down the long alleyway that looked as long as a bridge. I was about half way through the alley then two men showed up. They were holding me down with a knife. I was scared for my life and I thought that I would die. I was scared so I hit one in the head and ran. I ran and ran and I never stopped. I looked behind me and he was floating in the air. I thought that he was some random villain in a movie. When I looked up I froze like I was in a freezer. I stared for about a minute just looking at this big giant. He was wearing overalls. I looked at his eyes deeply. Then he shined a big light into my eyes. I was blinded and I couldn’t see.
Hi Neeko, You have used some good writers techniques in here like repetition and different sentence lengths. What was the inspiration for this story?
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